Based on the feedback from Mid Sem Crit, conceptually the library worked pretty well, however architecturally it lacked any sort of real architectural language, and it lacked the ability to properly read as a real library. The ability to render would have also helped graphically but was level two standard at that point as I hadn't been taught how to render as of then. Some of the public spaces such as the pool could have been more interesting as it was a simple rectangular pool with no interesting architectural form. the rooftop bar/Cinema view didn't really do ,much for my library redesign, didn't show much of a community oriented scene.